Weirdly Contest
December 12, 2007
Bernita at An Innocent A-Blog is hosting a writing contest, Weirdly Contest, so I decided to enter.
The goal is to write a scene, of a maximum 250 words, based on this picture. My entry turned out mildly strange, but the contest is entitled Weirdly, so that works.
Sacrifice
A man stood before an abandoned orchard. Black, twisted trees stretched out of the ground like fingers from a shadowed beast trapped below, a stark contrast to the pale grey sky.
He pulled a crumbled mass of paper from his pocket and unfolded it, flattening it with the palm of his shaking hand against a rock on the ground. His eyes burned as he focused on the picture. The colour from the field had bled up into the trees, striping them a yellowish green and blending the image together, yet it still revealed the exact scene he saw before him. Every time he closed his eyes and tried to drift into sleep, that image haunted him.
He rose to his feet and stumbled from the path toward the nearest tree. After six days without sleep, his legs moved like thin, brittle twigs. He brushed his hair back. It clung to his fingers like wet moss.
“What am I to do?” he asked in a weak voice. “Why bring me here?”
His questions were met with a cold silence. No birds in the sky called out, no insects buzzed below, and no branches creaked in the wind. It was the silence of something waiting, the silence of expectation.
He reached the tree and ran his hand down its leathery bark, his fingers leaving a trail in the moisture on the surface. Laying down at the base of its trunk, he watched the sky disappear as he sunk deep into the grass.




Thank you so much, Rob.
Comment by Bernita — December 12, 2007 @ 3:41 am
That is definitely weird and very creepy! Well done!
Comment by Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) — December 12, 2007 @ 11:38 pm
Creepy. Nice imagery! :) ((Haha, I actually started up a main blog outside of LiveJournal, just as a random sidenote!))
Comment by Amanda — December 13, 2007 @ 12:03 am
Thanks for hosting, Bernita.
Thanks Vanilla!
I’ve added you to my RSS aggregator, Manda. You should update us on your trip if you find time. I need to experience a warm Christmas vicariously through you guys…
Comment by Rob — December 13, 2007 @ 11:09 am
I came here to leave a message here.
Your story is weird.
I like how it starts with the picture, which could lead the reader believe the main character is some sort of a nuts; only to realize later on that this is for real.
Really creepy and well done.
Nice visuals.
The whole story kinda reminds me of a certain writer by the initials of G.G.M.
Comment by SzélsőFa — December 13, 2007 @ 1:06 pm
Thanks SzélsőFa! I’m glad you liked it.
Comment by Rob — December 13, 2007 @ 5:48 pm
Very nicely done. I love the opening metaphor. It sets the tone immediately.
Poetic and eerie. I enjoyed this one!
Comment by Chris — December 15, 2007 @ 11:57 am
Thanks Chris. I thought your entry was great, too.
Comment by Rob — December 15, 2007 @ 6:16 pm