Halo Short Fiction Contest
July 29, 2007
This is my entry for The Clarity of Night’s Halo Short Fiction Contest. I might enter more of these contests in the future. They’re nice writing prompts, and it’s great to get a bit of immediate feedback. It was difficult to stay under 250 words, and this is the first piece of fiction I’ve written in ages, but here it is:
Guide Me Home
The blood pools under me, soaking my ragged tunic and turning the dirt into deep red mud.
This isn’t my war. This isn’t my land. This prairie is a sea of grass that drowns me, and I long for the forest like a warm blanket on a cool night.
I had always feared the pain of being stabbed, the tearing of skin and muscle, but that fear was misplaced. The blade slid into my shoulder so easily I thought I’d imagined it.
The pain was just delayed, though, for it came when the blade was pulled out. I felt every inch of it sliding back through the wound, every imperfection of the blade, every notch and scratch in its metal, tugging at the newly exposed flesh. Through that pain, that burning, I could feel battles long past and soldiers long dead. The cold blade screamed against my searing flesh, a silent scream that left my body stiff and trembling.
I see the grove behind my cottage back home. I can feel the beams of warm sunlight shining down through the trees, illuminating the hidden particles of dust floating in the air, like cracks in a wall revealing a glimpse into another world.
A soldier falls with a cry to my right, and the sounds of the surrounding battle come crashing back over me. I lift myself from the ground and feel the hilt of my sword at my fingertips. I will not die here. I will see home again.




wow Robert that is excellent. Get on with writting your book would you I have been waiting years to read it.
Comment by tanya — August 1, 2007 @ 1:17 am
Thanks, I was pretty happy with how it turned out.
Book is on its way, just as soon as I think of a plot, and characters, and a setting, and which point of view to write from….
Comment by Rob — August 1, 2007 @ 9:31 am
Very well done. Good use of description and hopeful ending.
I have finished my entry, which will hopefully be posted on the site soon. Good luck!
Comment by strugglingwriter — August 1, 2007 @ 1:52 pm
Thanks, you too!
Comment by Rob — August 1, 2007 @ 2:09 pm
One of the good ones.
Comment by Bernita — August 6, 2007 @ 6:06 am